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When we knew one day we will wave each other goodbye,
Why did we laugh out loud,
When we knew these memories will make us cry,
Why we became so special to each other,
When we knew one day our messages won’t even say “Hi!“,
Why did we promise to be together forever,
When we knew one day we won’t even try,
Why did we do all that fun,
Just for a flashback before we die????
Splendid!
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Thank-you…
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Beautiful lines! Really emotive.
Life has to be like this! There are many separations, many deaths. But some memories do last a lifetime. When I look back, I feel really good about being fortunate enough to have people, these memories complete incomplete stories! βΊ
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Those memories accompany us when we feel lonely. And then we indeed feel fortunate enough to have such beautiful friends and relatives in our lives….
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So true it really hurts when someone stops responding suddenly…..who use to be available for us always….leaving the memories behind……but bcz of that …. nly we meet new people & new frnds…..who know the worth of a true frndship……..βΊ
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I’m really sorry but that wasn’t a part of my poem. It was about separations like after school, college or divorce.
When someone stops responding suddenly, that hurts way more than any separation. And for some people, it becomes impossible to trust anyone again in their lives.
Yes, we do meet some people who really know what true friendship or any other relationship mean. But they are very rare. Some are not fortunate enough to have true friends but I believe you are not among those unfortunate people.
I was going to say “have a good day” but I think it would be better if I say…have a great night.πβ
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Oh! i miss interpreted dt means……..n thanks for that explanation n making me clear…..wish u d same hv a great night βΊ
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It’s ok. Maybe I wasn’t able to make it clear through the poem..heheπ
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It’s not like that…..daljit…..it was quite clear…..π€
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Well then… Thank-you Ms….π€
Sorry I don’t know your name.
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You can address me as …’Pal’
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Okk… Then I’m not gonna use “Ms.”
Ms. Pal sounds a bit weird…..
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‘Pal’……yaa no need of miss…. sounds wierd π ….just like a weirdo like me
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Weirdo like you?π€
Now that just made me curious about you…
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HAHA….π
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Feels so good to read a poem from you after so long bro!!! This was so delightful to read! π
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I’m glad I was able to make you feel good.
I don’t like writing poems in English. I just can’t pour my feelings in them like I do in Hindi and Urdu rhymes.
Thank-you for you compliment.πβ
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I know how it feels. One day I was reading some soooo wonderful hindi shayaris and tried translating the same in English. I seriously wanted to kill my english!
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Hahahaπ…
That’s why I don’t like to write in English.
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Splendid work!
Keep going!
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Thank-you π..
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Beautiful thoughts veerey.. Dil ko choo gaya coz I can understand..
Every person walks into our life for a reason… They make us the person who we are, sometimes there presence add to our personality and sometimes there leaving are the reason of our strength… It all depends on how we take… I can relate to what u mean..but again it’s on us what we want to think… No doubt it hurts.. but it also give strength coz, I believe what happened is for good..
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Wow! It seems the feelings of my mind are exactly penned down!
I am dumbstruck. Awesome job!
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Now that is a hell of a comment…
Thanks Bhavika….it means a lot…
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You are always welcome. Instead I should thank you for this piece. I wanted to Re blog it. But there seems to be some error. Please keep writing. π
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I’m writing only because of some people, who ask me to keep writing otherwise I would have shut my blog down after 5-6 posts. Thank-you so much FRIEND…..
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Oh! It’s so fortunate you didn’t do that. And I hope you don’t do that ever. We don’t get such profound writers everywhere.
You have am amazing way of presenting your heart and mind. You should never ever bring it to a pause. π
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Oh my God!!!!
Now that’s a bit more than what I deserve.
I will try more than my best but I can’t promise.
But I can promise one thing that I won’t shut down my blog ever…even if I’ll stop writing I won’t stop reading and commenting on my favourite bloggers’ posts…
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Wow! What a modest soul you are. π don’t stop reading and writing both. WordPress needs bloggers like you. BTW, wrote a new post. Hope you like it. Since our thoughts resonate I am sure you will enjoy it. π
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I’ll just go and check it…
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Sorry..π I wasn’t following you…and I didn’t even notice that…
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It’s okay… That is not a problem. But I welcome you here. Would love to read your opinions. ππ
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And I would love to share my opinions.π
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Hahaha… Can’t wait to read more of them. ππ
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Well!
You have to wait until I read them ππ…
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Hahaha.. Well, patience is something I lack in excess. But I can wait until you read them. This time, it will be worth it. π
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Ok…. But it’ll take time… Because I’m in no mood to read anything right now… But I promise I will read the new ones as soon as you publish them…
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Oh wow..! That’s awesome. I will also take time to get something better for you to read. Till then you can take rest from reading and stuff. ππ
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I seriously want some rest right now π…. Going to sleepπ΄
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